Friday, August 7, 2015

"My Poem"  by Ben White

Marsala's instructions are Vague
His students are in the Dark
Confusion spreads like a Plague 
Glen  M. attacks students like a Shark 
However he must Admit
Ben has more Lines than a Coke Addict 

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3 comments:

  1. jordonmaricleAugust 7, 2015 at 10:39 AM

    this is fire man keep the good work up .

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  2. Glenn MarsalaAugust 7, 2015 at 10:41 AM

    A certain bitterness rages from between the lines of this fiery work of poetry. The questioning nuances of capitalized concepts adds a fierce and effervescent patina atop the architecture of the mad rhymes.
    & the off rhyme of admit & addict is truly astonishing in its dark prospect of the future for such a mysterious creature.

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  3. UnknownAugust 7, 2015 at 10:46 AM

    lol

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