Friday, August 7, 2015

"My Poem"  by Ben White

Marsala's instructions are Vague
His students are in the Dark
Confusion spreads like a Plague 
Glen  M. attacks students like a Shark 
However he must Admit
Ben has more Lines than a Coke Addict 

3 comments:

jordonmaricle said...

this is fire man keep the good work up .

Glenn Marsala said...

A certain bitterness rages from between the lines of this fiery work of poetry. The questioning nuances of capitalized concepts adds a fierce and effervescent patina atop the architecture of the mad rhymes.
& the off rhyme of admit & addict is truly astonishing in its dark prospect of the future for such a mysterious creature.

Unknown said...

lol